ÔN TẬP WRITING TIẾNG ANH HỌC PHẦN 4 HỆ CHẤT LƯỢNG CAO
GIÁO TRÌNH BUSINESS PARTNER
UNIT 5: PERFORMANCE REVIEW SUMMARIES
Chi tiết: Viết email, letter hoặc forms nhằm tóm tắt các thông tin chính từ cuộc họp feedback hoặc đánh giá hiệu suất của công ty.
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Further to our performance review meeting on Friday, please find below a summary of the main points discussed. I am pleased to report that you have performed well during your internship with the company. You have contributed well to the team, and feedback from your colleagues has been exceptionally positive. You have demonstrated an ability to show initiative, and some of your suggestions have significantly improved project management procedures in the department. It has also been observed that your timekeeping and ability to meet deadlines have been very good. Nevertheless, areas for improvement have been noted. These include extending computer-coding skills and improving knowledge of how your present role interacts with other departments within the company. This can easily be resolved with additional training – please fi nd attached details of suggested courses. Overall, this has been a very positive start with the company and I have no hesitation in offering you a permanent role with the department. |
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Positive comments |
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Constructive criticism |
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Suggested action |
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UNIT 6: PRESS RELEASES
Chi tiết: Thống cáo báo chí tuyên bố chính thức được gửi đến các thành viên của phương tiện truyền thông nhằm mục đích cung cấp thông tin. Văn phong thường sẽ trang trọng nhưng thông tin nên trình bày một cách thú vị và thu hút,
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Press release Atel and Yewserv in joint venture to expand global virtual service Atel and Yewserv have announced that they are entering into a joint venture to expand their operations in Asia. “Two market leaders in the virtual assistant service industry are joining together to create a luxury concierge service”, said Kejld Moller, CEO of Atel. The move follows months of speculation that this could be the first step in formalism a merger between the two ccompanies. Mr Moller refused to confirm or deny the rumours.”We are all expecting great things from this partnership, he said. The new concierge service is aimed at the luxury travel market and includes tie-ins with top hotel chains around the world. Mr Moller commented, ‘Our clients are high-achieving professionals who expect the best and who believe that business and pleasure can work together. Our new service will make that a reality wherever you are on the planet. The launch of the new venture was originally scheduled for February but has now been moved to April. Mr Moller apologised for the delay, stating that it was essential to get all the details right before taking such an important step. There is already considerable excitement around the eagerly anticipated online marketing campaign. Abuzz has been created using short previews of the ads on social media. Previews will be available to the media from2April prior to the main launch on4April. The official launch will be followed by a star-studded celebration dinner. For more information about the launch, click on the link below. |
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Further details |
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Quoting and reporting |
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Creating interest |
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Contact details |
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